More great dialogue

Continued from yesterday…

Paul Avery: What do you do for fun?

Robert Graysmith: I love to read.

Paul Avery: Mhmm.

Robert Graysmith: Umm, I enjoy books.

Paul Avery: Those are the same things.

This scene plays out the differences between these two characters— one is an introvert and one an extravert. Calling someone out when they say something dumb during a conversation is something only someone with confidence will do.

Robert Graysmith: I just want to help.

Ken Narlow: What are you, some kind of boy scout?

Robert Graysmith: Eagle Scout, actually... First class.

Narlows question is delivered with sarcasm, Graysmith’s response with sincerity. It both makes each character different but establishes what kind of person Graysmith is. He’s slightly naive.

At a bar, Avery and Graysmith are discussing the case, getting to know each other.

Paul Avery: Right, this can no longer be ignored.

Paul Avery: [points at Graysmith's drink, which is blue. Graysmith looks confused]

Paul Avery: What is that you're drinking?

Robert Graysmith: It's an Aqua Velva. You wouldn't make fun of it if you tried it.

Paul Avery: [tastes it. Time passes and they've both had a few more]

Nice interplay between the characters, Robert Downey Jr as Paul Avery is nothing short of genius in this film.

Melvin Belli: Inspectors, he sent this letter directly to my residence. It is a cry for help intended as a private communique.

Dave Toschi: Which is why you contacted The Chronicle.

Melvin Belli: The people have a right to know.

One of my favorite characters in the movie is the Attorney Melvin Belli— he’s larger than life as he was in the late 60s.

More of this kind of stuff soon.

A Return to Teaching... of sorts

My teaching credentials are mostly on the collegiate level but I got my start at the Worcester Art Museum, teaching 11-13 year olds how to draw. Recently I watched THE MAIDEN HEIST again which was filmed at WAM and its a better movie that it gets credit for— although the ending kind of falls apart.

But it got me thinking that if you want me to be engaged in your movie or book you need to give me two of three things;

1- Great characters

2- Great dialogue

3- An engaging plot that makes sense.

Seems easy, right? It’s not. Look at something like PACIFIC RIM— now to be fair I take a lot of shots at this movie and I never sat through the whole thing— but I was out after the fifth exchange of dialogue that made zero sense and when one character died and another stepped in and it looked like the same guy.

So what are great characters? Characters who either seem like real people, or who evolve, or both. With THE MAIDEN HEIST the characters were slightly one dimensional but the performances by heavyweights Christopher Walken, Morgan Freeman and William H Macy made it work.

The dialogue was solid, not great, but solid and the plot fell apart, but my bias towards seeing WAM and liking these actors made it enough to be enjoyable.

How do you create a winning formula? By observing. That’s the biggest component to creativity, observe the world around you. Base characters on people you know, or cast them from actors you know— as for how they talk— sit and listen to people in a coffee shop, listen for the rhythm, listen for the back and forth.

Let’s look at some really good dialogue from 2007’s ZODIAC;

Robert Graysmith: Doesn't it bother you that people call you Shorty?

Shorty: Doesn't it bother you that people call you retard?

Robert Graysmith: Nobody calls me that.

Shorty: Right.

AND LATER….

Robert Graysmith: Does anybody ever call me names?

Paul Avery: What, you mean like retard?

Robert Graysmith: Yeah.

Paul Avery: No.

More tomorrow.